Thursday, March 5, 2009

KiraKira 12-13 response

Katie was being really nice and trying her best for Lynn because she was seriously sick. She slept only a little everyday, was really tired and even had dark circles under her eyes. But one night, Lynn ordered Katie to bring her milk, so Katie did. But Lynn took one sip of milk and said she wants water. Katie got mad and brought water in a soapy cup. Lynn got mad at that again and she flung the glass to the floor. Katie told her she's ruining everything in the new house. Lynn looked hurt for a moment, but soon got angry again. This made their relationship worse, and it shows that Lynn's sensitive and getting angry easily because she's sick and she can't do everything she wants, and also she's going through adolescence.

1 comment:

  1. DaVin, I think that the stress of being sick along with all the other pressures are starting to mount for the family. This is a very difficult situation don't you think? Well written paragraph.

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